I really like your story! I've never heard of this TiMER movie thing or whatever. Anywho, just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome and to keep up the good work!
Hi!!! I love your story so far! Digging the Timer idea too! Friendly suggestion: I think you should avoid putting brackets in between everything; it kind of gives that diary vibe. Also add more description into the characters thoughts and feelings! Loved the last thing Bill said at the interview, very clever XD I’m super subscribing! Can’t wait for more :}