May 13th, 2015 at 12:57pm
Oh... okay. I thought it was done but I just saw your note. I'm interested in seeing how you change it. Hopefully it won't be so... depressing on Maya's end (like with what he did and then just leaving her, even though he was upset, was a bit harsh on her end). But then again maybe that just adds to the story though if you keep that. I'm just a sucker for wanting a happy ending. XD
But yeah, I'll be here. :)
Thank you for the comment. I delete the whole chapter and the new one is going to be totally different.
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