October 1st, 2011 at 05:08pm
That last sentence was absolute perfection. I love how you hinted at what was happening before entirely revealing what was going on.
I think you could have been clearer at certain points, you used a lot of 'she's and 'he's and I think mixed them up a few times.
But I really loved this
I understand that Glamour wanted a glamorous life but still.
I wouldn't kill my baby.
But you had me captivated within the first words
:)