They Claim They're Immortal - Comments

I'm actually dying to know more about Jessica's powers, and what she is cause there's no way that she's human xD I'm in love with Blade at the moment, I think he's adorable n.n

back on the mibba track WHY WHY WHY MUST HE BE DRUNK

dude i havent gotten emails for annoy updates so i reread it all and fell in love a thousand times over.
good lord I can't explain how much I love jake. she should just go an get it on with him.
thanks so much for the dedication i really appreciate it!
I hope everything is okay with you! and i can't wait for more :)

I don't think that it's I'm losing my touch, more my energy. Serioulsy, I get home from school and just collapse on the chair hoping that the weekend comes quicker. I've given up with school by first lesson on a monday. I have triple english lit on a monday morning, I wouldn't mind except I have this bitch of a teacher that's obsessed with proper usage of commas and the handing out of essays. She then refuses to give you a good mark if you have one comma out of place. She seriously needs to get a life.
And even though she does blood transfusions and such, I think it's a little different to drinking blood. Plus being a doctor I would have thought she'd have freaked out about whether or not his blood had some sort of funky desiease in or something lol!
Was so glad to see she was kidnapped by some freaky, bad-ass villains. I hope Blade doesn't turn out to be one of the good guy turns bad characters, cause he seems like he'd be someone I'd get along with if he actually existed lol! His personality so far seems great :)
Oooh you've thought of an ending, that makes me even more curious about the story, you don't have to give me hints but is it going to be a long story or medium length or short or other... if you can get other..!
When I first typed my username I put Fallen-Red-Angle, then I realised it made me sound like a maths freak and that I was potentially bad at spelling. I always have to doublt to check to see if I've spelt it right.
You have a job! =D What do you work as? I wish I had a job, but no-where seems to be hiring, and if they are they either want experience or people who can work week-days in the day, which unfortunately I cannot :( I don't know if I'd have time for a job now I think about it though, there just doesn't seem to be enough hours in the day :'( And of course, me saying that makes me sound like some retired granny who's in her kitchen baking and just doesn't have enough time to make the amount of cakes she really wanted to make. I wish I was a retired granny, wouldn't be thinking about school work if I was.
I always say I'm going to be one of those cool old people when I'm older, but I have a feeling I'm gonna be the cranky lady that everyone secretly thinks is a witch, who lives secluded in her house with thousands of cats. I'll name my cats with letters of the alphabet, so I have to have at least 26. (Just had to check there are 26 letters in the alphabet... how I passed english with good grades I'll never know :S )
Well although my comment is disappointingly short, I'm going to have to bid you farewell, I might make my comments longer for each chapter you write... I just need to think of pointless but exciting things to tell you. Oh btw, I don't live down the road from a McDonalds anymore, I moved back in with my mum. As much as I love my mum... I miss the McDonalds :'( Oh well, guess I'll just have to make do with the corner shop and chippy down the road... it's just not the same though.
Right, I'm off, farewell!

You guys should check out Queen of hearts by lemonysnicket. her name has a period in it but u guys should really check out that story lots of drama :)

OKAY, so I'm back. I hope this makes you smile =D
So glad you kept their names, I love Jake's name, it kind of fits his personality. This re-write has had a better start to it than the last few, seriously I'm in love with it! If I don't keep up to date though it's probably because I'm busy with sixth form, seriously, the amount of homework I'm given Is unbelievable. I had four lots of Biology homework in one lesson, almost cried! Okay so I never, but I would have if I was the emotional type of person.
So excited to see where this story is heading, I hope Jake stops being so stubborn... okay no I don't, it makes a good story with him being so stubborn all the time. I hope she hasn't been kidnapped... lets re-phrase that... I hope she hasn't been kidnapped by some potentially bad people would want to kill her. Personally I doubt she has though, I mean, they seemed pretty good at fighting away the bad guys. If she has, I'm more than willing to turn into the emotional type and cry for her. I swear, I'll cry a river.. or something.
You know what I find funny, how she hasn't freaked out yet about drinking blood. I'd be the type of person who is like 'psssh Demons, who cares... what do you mean I drank blood? *vomits*' << although that is kinda gross.
Is this going to follow the same plot as last time or do you have new ideas? And have you actually thought of an ending this time? Lol!
Anyways, I'm going to end my comment here, it's not too long... I don't think... Update soon! :)

UGH samantha,
she's gross and I hate her.
great update my dear

well i'd never say no to a makeout session involving Jake ;)
but it'd be a little random if he was like "my mother's dead..let's make out"
so it sufficed.
plus taryn was in this chapter and i love him dearly

Great update!!!!!
could use a little more Jake though ;)

i forgot how much I loved Tyler!!!
great two updates.
The only down side of this rewrite is that we have to experience asshole Jake again

the rewrite of the rewrite should last this time. :P
A great start, pleaseeee keeeep goiiinnngg!?

WOMAN
you had better stick with it this time ;)
great start!!