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  • gurue

    gurue (100)

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    Hm, this is an interesting start to a zombie story. Usually when I see these kinds of stories, by the end of the first chapter, you already have at least one zombie on your tail. But it was nice to see this start out with a film documentary, it's refreshing. The film documentor/narrator is pretty weird, in a good way ahah. You'd think if she's doing a documentary on the town, she'd look at more landscapes and houses and whatnot, but getting a good look at the people in Winn-Dixie never hurt.

    And I agree with zombiexpicturexshow - now I'm interested in why Pamela is just so darn nervous. Maybe it's just her nature or something not so important, but if it does lead up to something big, I wouldn't be surprised. Anyways, good job, this seems like it's going to be a good zombie story :')
    August 6th, 2011 at 05:56pm
  • hangsang.

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    It's cool, I like short chapters :)
    This is really good. I'll be looking forward to another update!
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:37am
  • zombiexpicturexshow

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    Hmmm, I'm curious to see where this goes. I love zombies so this should be very interesting.
    I wanna know more about this film documentary, and why Pamela gets nervous all the time.
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:22am