I LOVE this story!! And you are true to the book, which is even better. And I'm from Dorset too and where I live is about 15-20 mins from the sea. I love Fred and George!! And I love the fact that she drinks!! In my Harry Potter story my characters party and drink aswell, it makes them seem like normal teenagers. I think George is sooo sweet and I wish there would get together already; but I love the fact that it isn't all about romance and that you haven't rush her into being with him. But I really want to see what it would be like between them!!! Anyway keep writing and please update soon I can't wait for more!!!<3