Logan and Lauren - Comments

your sex scenes are intense, i cnt wait for the next update to see if she actually tell him hw she feel

That's crazy I just realize that the sentence that you click on the chapter for is one of the sentences in the freaking story. Damn I'm slow but I love the story still. I wonder if the is going to be some drama coming up soon? Like another girl? Or guy? Or her step father? Such an trouble maker. And see more people are coming and reading. Dirty joke. But please keep updating; I love this.

I officially,, luv you!!!! I'm a (Technically im mixed. Dominican black, and native american)black girl who loves,, absolutely loves white boys,,, you wrote this amazing story. Thank you for this story

“You can be a pallbearer at my damn funeral because he’s gonna kill me”
Nae, that line made me laugh really hard, I enjoyed it probably way too much. I just clicked on this one and now I'm into it. I really like it. I want her to let him sneak in, that way she does brake curfew because technically that would mean that she would have to leave the house. She isn't gonna leave, she'll just let him in.

Dang I love it... she better let him come....lol both ways but anyway still love the story and I do have to agree with Cali_cookies even though my boyfriend is mixed lol....Update soon.

I comment every update, and as a black girl who loves her some white boys, this has made my top 3 favorite stories I've EVER read on this site ; p update again plz *begging on my knees* lol

Dont doubt your writing ,your story is great especially sex scenes like this update, WOW. I'm reading it at school and Im about ready to go outside in 90 degree weather just to cool down from reading that lol you have to update, i need to know what's about to happen ; p

What did I tell you? That this was a amazing story. MoMo_92 and Cali_cookies agree with me and that scene was hot and isn't the coach lauren's dad uh oh thats some shit...update soon because I'm checking up...

This is an amazing story, I kind of need you to update soon ; p

fucking love this story...I wish lauren quits denying her feelings about her and logan's relationship and I really hope that logan has feelings for her...lauren and logan make a cute couple as well...I also love the sex scenes in the 2nd and 3rd chapters it was super sexy and exciting...can't wait to read more update soon!

Oh my!! Just for little ol' me I'm about to cry.....is Logan starting to have feelings for Lauren? And why does she keep denying her feelings..... I love the story and I officially love you (no homo) but I really want you to start updating this story like all the other ones because no matter what and
I don't care if a single person doesn't read any of the story its yours and you were happy with what you wrote so you posted it....it doesn't matter if somebody likes it or not....it only matters if you like it. Thank you for the update and please update more on this story and the others. And don't worry you always have a fan in me....

okay you should really love me for this I just saw that you had another story and I decided to check it out and guess what its another hit I love it and you should write more I don't care if I'm the only person to read it but I'm going to put it out there and try and have more people read it...

FINALLY OKLAHOMA GETS USED IN SOMETHING :)))))

Sorry, overexcitedness again.

OMG OMG OMG YOU USED MY STATE :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I'm sorry, I got overexcited there.