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  • M Shadows's Girl

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    Omg My mattie heart broken ahh Very good story Was it Valerie?? Ugh No one like her Maybe people like her but not me she with my dream man lol
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:49am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Thank you! And I will work of spacing them out. First story so I wasn't sure how it would look. But I will definitely continue writing.
    August 9th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • xXxEnchanted OnexXx

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    I loved it <3! Although all the paragraphs are really close together you should space them out a bit so it wont look like one big paragraph, but besides that it was a really good short story. You should continue making short stories you do a good job.
    August 8th, 2011 at 05:23am
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