Coming Out Of Me - Comments

  • Snowfall Melody

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    I really thought that was cute, bery in Oli's head. I would love to read more, they seemed like a well developed couple, knowing each other well even with Oli's lack of verbal communication. I would definitely read more about them
    June 15th, 2012 at 05:53am
  • slumflower

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    It was really good but the ending kind of felt like it just wasn't complete, well to me. It was nicely written.
    November 28th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • early_graves

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    Did he say it?! No I must no >:(
    that was good.
    I loved the back-door licking ;)
    October 1st, 2011 at 05:13pm