Gosh haven't been on in awhile! But arrrrrrgh, Toms back! Amaaaazing, and he's changed heaps. I like! Riley on the other hand, ughh, him an amanda need to choke themselves. How could he say that he dont want contact with his daughters?! Still a great writer I see, good job! (:
Ohmygosh, I can't help but like Tom. I think he's matured now and I want to see what's really going to go down within the next ten chapters! This is getting so good.
I feel so sad for Lola for what she going through. She's always had a hard with her parents splitting up, to Effie not caring about her, with her relationship with Tom, to having problems with Amanda over Riley, to her sister acting like a bitch towards her, to Riley cheating on her with Amanda since Morgan was born and having a kid with her. If Riley tells his kids when they're older that it was their mom's fault for not seeing him it's actually his because he's the one that is kicking them out of his life even if Lola did take them far away from him.
I do have to say I am liking this new Tom. Riley is making me so mad and I wish he would just realize that he was wrong and go back, but right now, I don't blame Lola! I love your story!!
Tom isn't dead I'm shocked I literally thought he had died. Maybe bringing Tom back might be a good idea. I don't hate you just so you know but I can't wait to see what's going to happen since he isn't dead.