Linger On. - Comments

gahhh so excited and happy that you updated!!! even if it was a filler, at least it was entertaining. i cannot wait for their drama to begin and i'm totally Team John (even though i love Joel so much) and i cannot wait for their sweet moments together! John is so in depth and i'm glad you made him a well rounded character like that. it makes him more interesting instead of being like Joel and just having one side (not that that's a bad thing because it's exactly what he's like in real life) but John just sparks more you know? anyways great job! i'll be dying until the next update!

p.s. because i only just described last time when i first commented i didn't realize what story was sitting in my e-mail notifications but when i saw it was yours i got really happy! =}

John really needs to man up and do something, but I think Rebecca and Joel are beyond adorable together (:

John is being so ridiculous. Either he straight up tells Rebecca that he wants her back, or he can back off. It's not fair for her because he's messing with both Rebecca and Joel. He's just going to ruin everything, and she's going to take the blame for it.

So I started reading this and I couldn't stop. It's soo good!! :) I'm very intersted in what's going to happen next between Rebecca and John, as well as Joel an Rebecca. Please update soon!!

I love john's character!!!!!<3 and omg this story is great. i dont like joel. he gets in da way of john :))

gr.
why cant he just find a single girl!?
her and joel are so cute together
<3

oooo lots of love interest for the new story! interesting. be careful not to make her too mary sue though, would be my only advice. no one likes that chick that all the guys like cause she just so perfect .... haha anyway, i found rebecca and joel less irritating this chapter haha. maybe its just the mood im in when i read it, but they pissed me right off last time. john is sooo...gah. like heartbreaking and infuriating at the same time. its so hard...

Wow now I feel like there is a huge secret about Joel... I'm afraid John might spill that anytime soon. But anyway, that was really cool! I love reading stories about love triangle and chase... Wow I totally dig this one.

Dear John, stop being so SEXY AND MISTERIOUS AND euhrgehgueigsehg
Im so stuck with this. I cant wait to read some scene involving cuteness between Becca and John tho.
Joel is amazing but we all know girls like bad boys :P

and btw I would love to read a Kennedy fiction! (and the trio John-Kenny-Austin would be a BOMB!)

I'm getting so nervous and anxious for all the drama to unfold! Someone is gonna get hurt and if that's Joel I'm going to cry, lol. Yet, I already felt bad for John in this chapter. Love triangles kill me, but they're my favorite. Haha.

So John has so many I guess personalities that Becca just got tired of it?
I mean he would be lovey dovey with her, then the next he would be stating that he is not in love with her.
And with Joel she can trust him since he is not so complicate like John is.
The first part made me laugh!
So it is very definite, John is still in love with Becca since he felt jealousy in his gut when the guys mentioned that she tried to give Joel a hand job.
I look forward to the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for posting today. It made me smile. So I'm pretty much in love with this story it is amazing and I am also completely torn on if I'm team Joel or team John.

Oh god, I love everything about this story! I'm pretty sure I already said that, but I don't care. I'll just say it every time because it's true! I love the drama already between the three of them! And the different kinds of interactions Rebecca has with Joel and then with John. Ugh, it's so good! I cannot wait for more!
Update again soon please!!!

however, i still think youre great, i just dislike the characters.

i dont like them
any of them
like, john just pisses me off
joel gives me the heabyjeabies
and becky just gives me this total bitch vibe.
i dunno, i'm just not feelin it. its that constant feeling that somethign awfuls going to happen...

*shudder*

My prediction is that this tour is going to get crazy dramatic/intense. I also have this feeling that John's going to win in the end. I dont' know why I think that. I just do.

ok John is clearly the "bad" guy in here but why does that make him SO DAMN SEXY
I cant make it with him, I mean everything he says for me is amazing
even the bad words or anything else
I guess I'm obsessed with him -.- but its a great obsession LOL

this story is so good!! i cant wait for more
John is not going to stay in the corner
and Joel shouldnt trust her so much I guess mmmm
Im sure she loves Joel but John has something big on her

Lets see what happens! I love this tho!

So with Joel, Rebecca trusts him not mess around with other girls but then with John she has always worried about him going off with another girl especially when he would drink.
Despite Joel saying that he trusts Rebecca he can't help but feel jealous every time Rebecca and John talk to each other.
So John still wants to be with Rebecca but the bro code is holding him back.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh my goodness this is so amazing!!! i love that it's got joel in it because not a whole lot people on this website write about him! and i love how john is kinda a douche bag in this because he's normally very nice and sweet but in others he can be an ass too, but this is just pure awesomeness. i am totally rooting Team John! and i hope that next chapter her and john re-connect or flirt or something, even though joel is a sweetheart, john is just...perfection. =}

GREAT JOB!

I like Rebecca with Joel, but is it terrible of me that I want her to be with John in the end?