A Rape Story... And Billie - Comments

perksofbeinggatsby (100)

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This is really good.

July 23rd, 2009 at 11:40pm

GeeandBobrockmysocks (100)

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thats why i needs more!

November 7th, 2007 at 11:06am

GeeandBobrockmysocks (100)

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you should wright more to this story!! it really good! it ended to soon tho

November 7th, 2007 at 11:06am

tyler farr. (100)

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great story! =]

September 14th, 2007 at 08:28am

xXDisasterXx (100)

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wow i loved the end but i think something should have happned between them
lol o well lol
Katie.

September 11th, 2007 at 06:16am

Northwoods_Waterpark (100)

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Eclipse:
Heyy...I think that your story sounds really interesting so far, but i just have a few pointers that could help your story be even better.
First, add quotation marks for dialogue, and whenever someone new starts talking, start a new paragraph...other than that, it's great.

pm me when theres more plz!

September 10th, 2007 at 11:15pm

K. Shadows (200)

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omg i luv this story!!!
is it over?
if it isnt then can u PLZZ pm me rite after u submit the next part?

August 24th, 2007 at 02:16am

feeling weightless; (100)

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i dont have a good feeling about them guys....

June 20th, 2007 at 08:11pm

Umbrella Pwnage (250)

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I like it!
I'm kinda nervous about the new guys....
Good update though.

June 20th, 2007 at 05:49am

ALBY (100)

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so ill be honest, i think this is not worth my time =/

June 20th, 2007 at 02:22am

Umbrella Pwnage (250)

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-New Reader-
Please write more REALLY soon!!!
Great story by the way.

June 9th, 2007 at 04:42am

feeling weightless; (100)

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-new reader- this is good! n this is a prequel n i didnt even read the 1st part... well second acually! lol more soon

June 9th, 2007 at 01:19am

iluvzackyvengeance!! (100)

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MORE SOON PLZZZ!!!! ME LOVE UPDATE!!!!

June 4th, 2007 at 11:15pm

lovemegood (100)

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new reader
i love your story
more when u can!

June 4th, 2007 at 10:11pm

iluvzackyvengeance!! (100)

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awwww...i almost cried!!!!

more soon on the sequel...and its actually not that hard to read w/ur grammar...:D
awesome story!!!!!

May 23rd, 2007 at 03:54am

Phantasmagoria (100)

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pretty good..

May 22nd, 2007 at 05:01am

Die.Romantic!! (100)

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why don`t you continue???!!!? that`s a really great story...

May 15th, 2007 at 04:35pm

iluvzackyvengeance!! (100)

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okay...she should REALLY tell billie!!!

OMG though!!! awesome update!!!! MATT IS AN ASS HOLE!!!!
MOOORE SSOOOOOOOON THOUGH!!! :D

April 23rd, 2007 at 04:18am

mwa_2539 (100)

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grr Matt, watch your back

April 23rd, 2007 at 03:21am

iluvzackyvengeance!! (100)

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i feel so bad for billie.....
his dad is an ass hole!!
MOOORE SSOOOOON PLEAZZZ!!!
i loooved the update!! :D
billie IS acting a bit strange though....
UUUPDAAATE SOOOOOOON!!

April 21st, 2007 at 05:10pm