i love the story so far and the daddy lessons were funny too. its adorable to see Dean being so clueless when it comes to babies and the breastfeeding comment made me grin, sounds so much like Deany. can't wait for the next one
This story keeps getting very funny each time Dean and his daughter is in it! Man Dean has a lot of work a head of him, especially when she gets older and become a rebellious teen. So Jo is somewhat upset that Dean got someone pregnant but Dean won't tell her who that woman was? Yeah she has it hard for him but right now Dean is too focus on raising his daughter. I look forward to the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love how awkward dean seemed around his own daughter- very in-character kind of scene. From what I've read so far, this is gonna end up being a can't-miss story. Your writing style is the bomb!
OMG this the best second Supernatural story that I have com across! The way you write the whole situation is just unbelievable! But it sucked that Lucy was killed before she could hold her baby girl. Though enjoy how Sam held Cassie and that she went poop! LOL You have caught Dean and Sam's personality just right! I cannot wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, I came across this whilst randomly searching for Supernatural fanfictions that aren't my own, and now I am commenting, cause I know how annoying silent readers are. :3
Chapter 1 I can completely see the opening scene. I can see Sammy waking Dean up, Dean getting aggravated. Just all of it was written so close to character, I can tell you know the boys well. You do them much justice. :)
I've often thought that Dean would get a phone call like this. And wondered what his reaction would be, if he did. I can completely see him reacting to the news that way.
Sammy wants to follow him. :D Once again, you portray their emotions and mannerisms so naturally and with great skill.
They met prior to season one. That's exactly how I would do it, which is odd, but that makes me love it even more! I love when they actually tie-in and don't conflict with the seasons.
Chapter 2 He gets so indignant and protective, defensive almost when he gets there. Complete unadulterated Dean. I feel like I keep repeating myself, but I feel like all I can tell you is how masterfully you capture him. But not just the "him" that you see out in public. His inner workings as well. Too many times, Dean is treated like this big, bull in a china shop type character. But we all know there's more to his character than that.
Chapter 3 The entire picture of him walking toward the nursery gave me a bit of a lump in my throat, and, I'll admit, I got a bit misty eyed as he stood looking at his own daughter. The entire thing was beautiful. Favorite line: It was like everything had faded into the background except that little baby.
Chapter 4 Bobby is just wonderful. I clearly visualized his face and heard his voice as he complained about Sam calling.
I don't like this Eliza. Not at all. I can already tell that she is going to be a source of much trouble for them... NO! LUCY CAN'T BE DEAD! D: Oh, that was painful!!! So much suspense! I'm subscribing, cause you really have me hooked now.
And I love the way you have it placed just before he goes to Hell.