Tortured Hearts - Comments

I love Cora!!!!! And Mark!!!!! And Alicia!!!! Will and Hanna can suck spaceballs :) and I would read Charlie's story...it'd definitely be interesting. I don't want Will and Alicia to get back together but I don't want him to be with Hanna....can he die alone with fifty cats???? and Hanna can have a successful career as a pornstar....maybe?

nooooo Will can't fall for Hanna! ):
Alicia and him were so perfect together! Mark is great and all, but i still want her with Will! (:
I like having both pov's in the same chapter. great chapter as usual! can't wait for the next update

Yeah.... Joe is supposed to say hoe...autocorrect is mean :/

I blame Hanna for Will's evil attitude. She probably did some skank Joe voodoo on him. Anyway, Mark is amazing, but that's obvious isn't it?

Can Hannah and Will "fall" off a cliff or something? Please?

yay a new chapter! this hasn't been updated in a long time and once i saw this in my email, i was excited! great lovely chapter as always, keep up the good work! :)

ugh like legit Hanna is a freaking bitch >.> I would love to just rip her a new one. Like I wanna just somehow come into the story and kick her ass for Alicia. I wish Will would have told Alicia before she found out the hard way/: It just hurt her in the end. Hanna must end! MWAHAHA! Today was my first day back to school also so I'm a bit hyper aha xD

YAY I'm excited that I gave you an idea! :D

I KNEW there was something fishy going on with Will and Hanna.
I'm happy to know that Will isn't the bad guy in this situation.
I just wish Alicia will hear him out and forgive him.
AND I just hope that Will doesn't develop feelings for Hanna D: that would suck.

Anyways, good job!
I cannot wait to read the next update! :)

FGDFGHEURBVJEDFGURIFHDJ I HATE HANNA! that bitch!

OMG!!! Please tell me he still has feelings for Alicia and he's only going out with Hanna because of blackmail!! This is awesome! Write more!! :)

Finally Charlie actually talked to Alicia! Aha it's about time really. But he's still acting too clod for my liking): Alicia really is too hung up about Will. . .

Aww I wonder why Charlie is upset.
& Is Will and Alicia ever going to face each other?
I want to know exactly what happened from Will. (:
Good job btw.

Maybe charlie likes alicia?
just a thought.
btw. great chapter.
Something about Mark seems so mysterious to me. It's rather he's really good at reading people or somethings up. I don't even know. hahaha

I started to read this earlier and then I had to get off but now I finished it aha. Well, I 'm am starting to fall for Mark. He is absolutely amazing. He can help her forget about Will(:

I think Charlie is ignoring Alicia because of something with either Mills or Will. . .

charlie nooooooooooooo!
yay for alicia for slowing getting over that meanie face poopie head

I love the part with Cora's bag. :] i can't wait for more.

this is off to a great start.
keep it coming :)

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay for violence

uhm, yeah I saw that you put a chapter out and I almost jumped out of my seat xD I love it. I do love Cora and I just wish Charlie would become his old self again): I miss him.

I can't wait to read this :)
I'm very disappointed that Will cheated on her!
I hope they can be together again.
Loved Twin Hearts and will eventually love this story.
Keep up the good work.