Temptation Is Torture - Comments

I must admit I only read the first chapter but...
Your writing is PERFECT, woman, perfect! You write really well too!
Alex seems like such a cutie pie and Austin is all proud for his daddy aha.
I like this, I think I'm going to read the rest of it ;)

So sad its over but it was AWESOME while it lasted
:D

I liked how this story meshed together. I felt like Alex's dad's story inside was very interesting and I thought it was unique that Alex came out before his father. I liked how you included Church as an important part of Alex's life and I thought you included your sentence very well. Your word was incorporated smoothly, but I felt as if the quote was a little awkward. I still really liked everything and I liked how you interpreted the picture. Thank you for joining my contest. :)

I really enjoyed this chapter!
Waiting for the next updated
:D

I'm sad it's going to be done by the end of the week but it has been awesome while it has lasted
:D

OH!
Things are getting quite better
;D

Oh update soon! :)

I don't see how there aren't any comments on this!
It's awesome
You should update soon
:D