The Last Mystery - Comments

This is a really interesting take on the Scooby Doo franchise. I was never really a huge Scooby Doo fan, but I'll keep an open mind with this. I was totally expecting this huge, tearful reunion between the gang - then Velma's dead. o.O I mean, I don't think the story can go on without Velma, seeing as she's the brain of the entire group. I, however, am how very fond of Scooby Doo not talking. Isn't that the whole core of the franchise? Anyways, this is really nicely written, but not my cup of tea, otherwise. You've done a good job with this and I wish you luck.

Just a comment on my layout to respond to quitessential bella. I did not make it, and I don't know where to get one. I honestly just used the suspense theme default for mibba. If anyone knows how I can get a new one, I'd love to have one.

Interesting perspective on the Scooby Doo Franchise. I liked the first chapter but I don't like how Scooby Doo won't talk. Its like the main point of the whole franchise.

I do like how you had us all think aww this will be a nice reunion then Velma's dead! Oh no! Good job though keep writing.

It's a lovely concept, because who doesn't love Scooby Doo?! Though, I'm fairly sceptical about whether this is going to work or not. I mean, the point of Scooby Doo was the sillyness of it. Storywise you've got a fairly well developed way of writing, though I did notice an error or two. Particularly with your dialog. The layout doesn't feel fitting, but maybe that's just me. Keep it up though, I'm curious to see whether this could lead somewhere or not.

This makes me want to start watching Scooby Doo again...
I love it, though