White Nights - Comments

I want more :( This seemed to be quite promising and I'm already hooked. Abbey just seemed so different. Any hope of continuing?

PS. Draco calling her phony made me think of Holden Caulfield which made me laugh endlessly. All he needs is a sister and a hat.

I have a policy where I try not to read stuff until there are more than ten or fifteen chapters out. But the music video convinced me otherwise.
Keep it coming!

omg he's her protector. *le squeal*
She seems kind of oblivious...
I'm excited none-the-less. I hope you post more. (:
Also, I wanted to point out:

In the first paragraph of the prologue: "Her lips stopped moving, her hands fell to her sides and she turned away from the coffin with a wide smile on her face. She skipped away from the group of mourners with a wide smile on her face." Maybe reword one of the sentences so that they don't both end with "with a wide smile on her face."

In the first chapter, about halfway through --> "It is impolite to ask a person question before answering their question,” Abbey replied calmly. Put an "a" before question. :3

i like this story like Lexie Peyton; i can't resist a draco fanfic but it does seem to be a read it all before kind of thing. i'm not meaning to be rude because i really like how this story is going. (abbey is awesome) so i know that as the story progrosses your going to put your own style on to it. i can't wait for the next chapter!

Well first off, I adore the summary. It's short, quick, and to the point, and it doesn't give everything away. There's an air of mystery already surrounding the story, which I love. And the layout is drop-dead gorgeous! The banner! The colors! <3

I love that Abbey refused to wear the conventional mourner's outfit in favor of something her father liked. It's cute and very sentimental. I already get the feeling Abbey's going to be a free spirit, in a way. I also like that the Morrisons and the Malfoys are already established family friends. I dunno why, but it just makes everything seem more dramatic if there's already a familial connection rather than just meeting each other.

I'm already hooked, especially with that last line about the "evil fighting to consume her." Very dramatic and dark. I like it a lot! Definitely subscribing to find out more <3

*subscribed*
please update this magnificent story soon!

Gorgeous! I absolutely love it! Despite it being a fanfiction, you give it your best with amazing detail. I await the next update :)

This sounds very interesting. The summery is just breath taking, I died! I am subbing :D I do hope an update is soon.

I can't resist a Draco Malfoy fan-fic, I just can't. xD

This seems really good. I like the layout and I really loved the summary! (:
The only thing I'd suggest is try not to make it cliche, because from the summary it seems like I've read a thousand stories like this before.

I'm still subbing though! <33 (: