Rockstars Make the Best Lovers - Comments

  • HarlowKittie

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    I have bad vision and found this this story hard to read because of it. I read through the first chapter, basically a character description which worked for me as I have no idea who this person is. I will be honest the constant partying seems like a bore to me. But hey I a, sxe girl, what do you expect. All and all i think it was written, a few thing i would change. but good. keep up the writing! :0)
    September 8th, 2012 at 10:25am
  • xoxdiebearxox

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    I cannot read this D: Literally! You need to change the font color or something. The story is going well though! It all seems like one fun night after another :p
    July 21st, 2012 at 01:12am
  • ATLlover77

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    I couldn't read it so well because of the dark gray font over the black background, but it's ok!:)
    Anyway I really like Katie's whole personality. I like how you started the story! It wanted me to read more. Also the plot is awesome! The way that they meet is different and interesting!! :)
    July 12th, 2012 at 08:07am
  • EzioAuditore

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    I found it a bit odd that your first chapter is basically just a character description, buuuuut..that's quite alright! :) Though, once the actual story starts it gets really good. I like your way of writing. Sometimes there's a few word in a sentence like "made my heart stop and my feet stop." that would sound better as "made my hear and my feet stop" But still, not bad! :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 06:50am
  • jaseyraelover

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    I like this story:) uppppdattttttteeeee
    January 22nd, 2012 at 12:01am
  • gothique4

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    i like this - the chemistry between them is pretty hot
    January 21st, 2012 at 05:08am
  • Kikki.Rixx

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    awe thank you so much :) well it is an andy story but i will try to get Ashley in the story more haha
    November 16th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • Mikeywayishothehe

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    Need more Ashley!! Haha i love that asshole:) anyways great story! Keep up the great writing!
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:24am
  • mad_hatter_

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    I like it,and your writing stylee. Update it soon :)
    August 16th, 2011 at 11:26am
  • KaylaInMotion

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    Love the new chapter :) update soon :D
    I honestly didn't see the sex scene coming haha, but it was great none the less ;)
    August 16th, 2011 at 09:20am
  • Kikki.Rixx

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    Thanks! :D I'm actually just starting the second chapter. This should (hopefully) be a decent length unlike the first chapter which was short by my standards ><
    August 15th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • KaylaInMotion

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    I like this story :) hope you update it soon
    August 13th, 2011 at 08:02am