I have bad vision and found this this story hard to read because of it. I read through the first chapter, basically a character description which worked for me as I have no idea who this person is. I will be honest the constant partying seems like a bore to me. But hey I a, sxe girl, what do you expect. All and all i think it was written, a few thing i would change. but good. keep up the writing! :0)
September 8th, 2012 at 10:25am