On The Mend - Comments

Can I say I just don't see how some one can cheat on someone else once let alone 38 times wow

I just reread this story and it made me remember how obsessed I was with it when you first started posting it. I'm glad you finished it, but I wish that the baby was Adam's, they would be the perfect family. I really hope you post and epilogue, but if you don't, I will be happy to read your future stories!

I just reread this story and it made me remember how obsessed I was with it when you first started posting it. I'm glad you finished it, but I wish that the baby was Adam's, they would be the perfect family. I really hope you post and epilogue, but if you don't, I will be happy to read your future stories!

Ok somehow this chapter managed to make me feel bad for Brody, who I previously detested and wanted out of the picture. It's got to suck losing the woman you love and your baby and your life together. I wish Sophie would have figured herself out before she got pregnant by him.

I really enjoyed this story, it was different and I like Sophie's attitude and point of view. Looking forward to more stories by you!

I had a feeling this was the end about half way through. I'm so sad to see this go. This is the first Burrish story I've ever read and it just makes me like him that much more. I picture him to be exactly like this in real life. I loved this story from the very beginning to the very end. I always looked forward to the updates. The wait was always worth it.

Please for the love of god, let there be an epilogue?! I need to know about that baby and if she saw Adam in court and their life as a family.

I can't wait to see what else you have in store, for any future story. :)

Ok, wow. Where to even start? First off, I want to thank you for including me in this beautiful piece of writing. Truly an honor. Second, congratulations on this wonderful story. This chapter was so beautifully written, and so moving. (Also, hott). Sophie and Adam have come so far, and you have developed them as characters and their journey, so well. I have loved this story from the beginning and will continue to consider it one of my favorites. I would love to see an epilogue or a "Where Are They Now" chapter. After all, there has got to be some dispute over the baby! Whatever you choose to do will be wonderful, I'm sure. Congrats and Thank You once again...

It's him it's always been him...yea!!! Sorry to see it end but glad you finished it

Perfection.

It's over?! But I love it! I wanna know what happens with Brody and the court and the baby!

You have to write an epilogue!! What about the baby? I need to know how Adam feels about the baby

Yeeeeees! I'm so glad they're together. I really hope by some chance the baby is not Brody's. he should just let go and move on.

I'm soo sad this is over.
What a whirlwind of a story, but I am glad the two of them are finally in a good place =)

Oh, girl. Your story is doing things to me. I've already laughed and cried while reading it. I love how much grey area there is, just like real life. My favorite thing about this story is that there's nothing easy about it. I hope you know what I mean. I'm sure you do. This is so well written. I am absolutely looking forward to the next time you update.

UP DATE SOON! PLEASE!

Omg, I thought it was real and now I'm like crying. Ughhhhh. Please update soon!

I loved that we got to see a little bit of a different perspective when reading through Adam's point of view!

I liked that it was a dream! Can't wait to see reality :)

I'm so glad you're continuing this story!
Can't wait to see what the Sophie's reality is

Glad it was just a dream....interested to see the reality

You have to update soon!