Pandemonium - Comments

Whoa!!!!!!!
:D

He's a sadist, not a masochist. I'm sorry that was bothering me a lot.

I like this. It's pretty awesome. But Chaos and Riot need to get off their high horse.

Chaos needs to stop denying his feelings for Riot
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Whoa!
:D

Loved the last paragraph!!!!!

Aww they are so cute together
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Loved it. Update!!!!!

great story update soon please

this story has a really awesome start to it:) the only concern I have is that their "relationship" is moving a little too fast and it should take a little longer for the two to get on the same page with one another in order to keep their individual personalities in check. (holy run-on sentence, batman) anyways that's just my opinion. keep up the good writing, though, and try to develop the characters a little more before you have them jump into anything :)

Pleaaaase write more! I love this story!!!

-- Bliss

i really like this story. it great to see a different way of tell a story instead of them falling in love right away like in most other stories
hope to see the next chapter soon :)

Lurve this story! ☻

Riot is my favourite..because of his hair and name! xD

Great story! Id write a full review but im too lazy :) haha keep it up!

Fantastic!
:D

Please please please post it soon. I really love this story, it's one of my favourites on Mibba :D

this looks like it's going to be a great story:D
i'll come back later and read it when i have some time:D haha

YAY!
I'm so glad you updated
And Riot and Chaos are so going to fall in love
:D

awesome story, hope they actually end up in bed with eachother :L

I so llloooovvvveeeeeee this!
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