I really enjoyed this, though it was a little teen drama for my tastes, and the stories font is really frustrating, you might want to try a white font. I'd like some more philosophical things. Like in depth thoughts, perhaps explaining why he fights. Just a suggestion, other than that, it's fairly well done.
August 13th, 2011 at 06:54pm
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