One of the Boys - Comments

she didn't have to change her appearance for nick! why can't he like her just the way she is!

she didn't have to change her appearance for nick! why can't he like her just the way she is!

o; I really don't think she should change for Nick, but anyways, UPDATEEE FASST!! ;)))

This is really good... I wish you could see the look on my face. :D

I love this! great job!

OOOOOOOO! She's totally changing herself. More! More! Moreee!

I enjoy this story so much (: can you please update soon? The suspense is killing me xD

Hi. I know this is extremely late... (From the my Halloween bowl)

I picked this story to read, mainly because I haven't read a Jonas Brothers fan fiction in a very long time. Normally, I don't like love triangles... at all; especially if it's one girl and two boys, haha. But I liked the way it started, because when the main character is somewhere out in public, she bumps into -insert celebrity here- it gets me excited. Probably because I fantasize about that happening to me, haha… but that will never happen.

Wow. I just rambled there. -__- I told you I wasn't good at story comments!

Anyways.

So far, this story is pretty good. The story layout is kind of... not fun? Though… that’s probably because it's a premade, and almost half of Mibba uses premades. But that's just me. I could make you a banner if you'd like and you could make your own story layout to match? (If you want... that is.)

Alex is a good character. Though, maybe she's a little too good. It just kind of bugs me how Joe is all BAM, "I like her!" when he first meets her. I personally can't relate to her at all, because I have two sisters and one brother. Haha, I wasn't much of a sporty person either. But she is a good character. I enjoy reading from her perspective.

Though, I do think that her having feelings for the two boys were a little too fast. Also in the beginning how she just met Nick at a store, and having no idea who he really was she goes and invites him to her house.... where she lives alone. He could have been some psycho. I thought that part was a bit ridiculous.

Over all… it’s pretty good. I really do like it! And I’ll be reading, and commenting.
But this will probably be the longest comment. Haha.

Oh, and I also want to punch Tina in the face, really putting Nick out in the open like that?
Now that is ridiculous! Smack her Alex!

Awesome as always!

I enjoyed it a lot.
It's very descriptive and well written.
Update soon.
:)

Just found this todayy and love it. Update please?(:

I was really looking forward to Alex confessing her feelings to nick... Why did Tina have to come :(
Great chapter :) cannot wait for more :)

I love your title

Anywho
When reading your story
I quite enjoyed it
I love how you broke up the chapters in parts
I dont know why but it really caught my eye
You did a great job writing it

I can't wait to see more
Keep up the good work
<3

I absolutely lovee this story! :D Nick needs to get his head straight and get Alex already!

Yay, yay, yay! You updated! And if your lifes in a fix, please tell, I want to pray for you......No specfics are needed, just ask me to pray for you and I will.

I meant to post this awhile ago, but I didn't have time....I still want Alex and Nick....And I kinda want to see Nicks REAL girlfriend. :)

good update! :)

I LOVE this story! Sorry I haven't commented or anything, but thats just me....And I DID subscribe! In fact I have been checking every day to see if you had put anything new!!

nick J <3