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  • PoeticMess.

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    And oh gosh. Thank you!? I doubt I was/am better. I just kinda do my own thing off in my little corner of Mibba. & It's cool! Everyone outgrows stuff! :) I haven't read much of other people's stuff either. I basically just stick to my own, like I said. Mr. Green
    June 14th, 2015 at 02:05am
  • PoeticMess.

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    That's exactly how I feel about my first Ronnie Radke story too. haha. I love the story but hate the writing and part of me wants to rewrite it, but I also want to leave it alone (because it was my first one, y'know??) I don't know how I just came upon this now and not back in the day, but I'm glad I did anyway. :)

    Also! You should check out Just Like You. I adore it.
    June 14th, 2015 at 01:58am
  • guysinmyhead

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    Also, random, I think I read your stories way back when and was a huge fan so thanks xD You were much more talented back in the day with your old stories so you're probably still much more talented that me <3 I'm sorry I haven't read anything of yours as of recent!
    June 14th, 2015 at 01:57am
  • guysinmyhead

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    Hey! I guess I'm a mind reader, I actually never wound up listening to their new album, I based it off of an old ETF song lyric I think... I don't remember. It's been a long, long time xD I do need to edit. I was skimming it recently, problem is if I were to edit it I'd probably honestly just re-write it. I'm my worst critic so I literally hate most of the story xD but thank you regardless! I do have to actually do something with this eventually, you're just making me kick into gear. Maybe I'll actually fix it tomorrow because now I have nothing but time xD
    June 14th, 2015 at 01:55am
  • PoeticMess.

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    Hey wow! I'm so surprised I haven't seen this before now. I'm constantly searching for FIR fanfics and must've missed this one somehow! I've barely started reading it though, but I intend to get through it soon and onto the second one. :)

    I just wanted to say, that even though it's finished, you might want to go through and edit a little bit. The most major/helpful thing you can do is put spaces in. Separate the speech and paragraphs by paragraph breaks (hitting enter) to make it easier to read.

    I'm so confused as to how this was finished in 2012 but the title is the same as FIR's new album. Either that's a huge coincidence or it got changed. When I first clicked on this, I thought it was a recent story so it really threw me off!

    Gonna go read now. :)
    June 13th, 2015 at 11:02am
  • propanekiss

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    i think it's chapter 7 when shes going though withdrawal it reminds me of the movie candy when her and her boyfriend are going though withdrawal to ;) awesome story btw hears a link to the scene if you wanted to see http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pDkyYznKEjc&feature=related it's a really good movie ..it's australian ;)
    February 13th, 2012 at 03:43pm
  • PixieChick101

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    story's over......boo........buttttttttttt
    NOW ON TO THE SEQUEL!!!
    January 1st, 2012 at 07:35pm
  • PixieChick101

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    i <3 your story and enjoyed reading it.
    i want you to keep writing it and have a sequel!
    i really <3 the song!
    do you write the song yourself or with a friend?
    keep writing plzzzz
    n' HAPPY NEW YEAR'S EVE!
    December 31st, 2011 at 06:11am
  • kayleeLAUREN

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    Ahhhh I Love This
    Definately Option 2
    December 31st, 2011 at 02:32am
  • iizanna90

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    i'm in love with this story no ending it write on it's not dragging on at all i loveeee it if you end it i'll cry
    December 30th, 2011 at 04:04pm
  • Haysay

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    2! I think there should be a time lapse or something.
    December 30th, 2011 at 02:38pm
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    I love this story and i'd be alright with 1 or 2 as long as it continues! Loved this chapter! He said he loved her!!!
    December 30th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • FallenDeathAngel23

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    I think you should go with option two! I really like this story. :D
    December 30th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • Arcapello

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    You should do a sequel? Or continue this one.
    December 29th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • Haysay

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    Keep reading I shall, can't wait for the next chappyy ;]
    December 29th, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • Reddy Freddy

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    Never stopped reading!! Told ya I love this story. Keep at it.
    December 29th, 2011 at 01:13pm
  • PixieChick101

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    keep writing plzzzzzzzz
    new song??????????? great cnt wait 2 hear it!
    December 29th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • Haysay

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    AN UPDATE yessss. Now I definitely want to read more!
    December 28th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • Arcapello

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    Thanks for updating :D
    December 28th, 2011 at 06:31pm
  • Reddy Freddy

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    Jacky's almost there??!! YAY!! Heeee's almost through the trees and on his way to Grandma's house!!! So excited and loved the chapter! Keep up all the hard work.
    December 28th, 2011 at 10:56am