Reminds me of the new show Once Upon a Time. Yours is so much cooler though because you made all the chAracters and kingdoms up on your Own. I really like it -Hannah Addis :)
Hi!! It's me again. So, I really like this story too. It's very magical and just pain amazing. Your stories are just so great. I don't know how you do it. Bravo. This story kind If rem
The picture is lovely, and oh boy, I really like the background image. :DD The colors on the fonts were a bit... well they didn't really blend in that good with the picture and the background. But you can change that easily. But... you don't have to change it.
Preface
Got me hooked. Wonderful. Beautiful. Wording was extra wonderful/beautiful. Wow. You are a great writer!
Chapter
AMAZING! Perfect intro! I just think that you might want to put later on the in the story how he found her... :D
I'm subbing and really look forward to reading this soon. :D Update!!