Forgot to say one more thing. I like the background pattern of your layout, but I found the white on black a bit hard on the eyes as I got further into the story. Just a heads up. :)
I wonder why this doesn't have more comments?! It saddens me :( Anyway, I love that you took on the three Black sisters! I haven't finished reading, but what I have read, I've liked. I love the dynamic between Bellatrix and Narcissa. I also love that you've included how Bellatrix actually does care about family, but for the sake of her allegiance to Voldemort, she keeps it hidden. Thanks for the great read!