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Wow. I love it. I don't even know what to say because it's so beautiful. Your writing style is so intricate and it feels so real. Please keep going with it.

"Not only does she fuck you, but afterwards you’re so gone and lost that you don’t even know how to resurface once she’s gone." absolutely perfect and i want to quote every sentence

"I drank anyways because Sonny’s eyes were gleaming in the light when he offered me the cup." yesss fucking nice line and fucking nice chapter, really really great job i missed this story almost as much as i miss you

I have no idea what to say. I'm still a reader? I don't know, I'm here.

for some reason i'm laughing really hard at the author's note just being ???? because that is actually the most accurate fucking depiction of how i feel every time i post a new chapter to something dude especially if it's been a while since i've updated im just kinda throwing these words at people like five months too late and i have nothing else to offer. wow i'm fucking rambling anyways "I went back inside when I ran out of cigarettes and ran out of ways to kill myself." was a brilliant line and so was this chapter, i hope this keeps getting updated because this is a good thing and i really like it. i hope you're doing well helga!!!

" Sonny didn’t do anything—he walked on everyone and I’m sure I’ve got his footprints all over my body." jesus i wish i could nail last lines like you can this is perfect your writing feels like poetry to me like that sounds pretty stupid maybe but i just got back from a poetry slam (so i'm pretty high still) but these bits about mosquito bites and people being diseases i loVE IT

"he walked on everyone and I’m sure I’ve got his footprints all over my body"

tHIS

so great it's nearly ridiculous

"Sonny was in love with Remy and she only liked herself" FUCK i swear i cant handle your writing anymore these one liners are brilliant and i'm really excited for this story and for some reason the title is cool as hell i like it a lot

update soon helga
and i still wanna watch brick wit hyou

waah this looks really cool it reminds me a lot of my story Black Sheep Come Home that i wrote with this girl named emmie but we never finished it so i'm excited to see what direction you'll be taking this in

update soooon p.s the layout is perfect

Could you please make the font a little darker. It was impossible to read against such a light background. The narration is a little choppy, but I feel it's suppose to be that way so I like it. I already like the story and the characters so I hope you update soon.

oh my god can i just love you and this and this is kajhdjkahf. omg.
i love the weird love rectangle even though she sort of hates elsie but it's just so perfect and i love how elsie is totally gay for sonny and watches him and remy is just like don't even give a fuck. and sonny just sounds like a weird dick of a guy but i love weird dick of a guys. and she's all remy is my best friend (i think). AND ELSIE KILLED HER MAYBE.
and just alkjdioauf.
these characters are just orgasmic in their own weird little ways but that's the best kind of way and i love them.
THIS IS TOO GOOD, OKAY? OKAY. I'M OKAY WITH THE FACT THAT I DON'T MAKE MUCH SENSE.