You Are the Music in Me - Comments

Wow.

Just wow.

This was beyond any words I can say to express how much I liked this story. I agree with ^^ with this one.

I don't know anything about Glee or the actors from the show, so please forgive me. lol
Everything was very well written. Detailed, nice flow, good sentence structure.
There's nothing better than being able to read through a story easily so good job.
I totally wasn't expecting any sex but you still retained a nice and easy flow.
Also the way you end the chapters is quite humorous ! Great work :]

First of all, how the hell does this not have more comments? This was amazing. I got so turned on by this I contemplated on touching myself. It's 7:30 A.M. right now and you've got me wanting my boyfriend to come home from work to fuck me senseless.

The detail in this was perfect. Everything you wrote I could imagine. I love how she was flustered and worried about getting dinner ready. I loved that they were holding back until they couldn't take it anymore. All of your words flowed together, all of their movements and thoughts, emotions were thorough. You began well and executed to the end.

Now if you'll excuse me...I have something to do now.

;)

Mmmmm salty goodness i think it was almost waiting 3 months for love you (: