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  • chasing_circles

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    nice
    October 19th, 2011 at 01:43am
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    Lol, I typed price instead of piece, sorry!
    August 13th, 2011 at 08:02am
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    I think that all in all this was a very deep and moving piece. It really touched me on a very emotional level, and it was generally very good. The only things I would suggest are that you should break it up into paragraphs, and there were a few minor misspellings in there to watch out for. Paragraphs help a price flow and make it much less menacing for the reader. Other than those two things, this was a really enjoyable and touching story and I liked it a lot :)
    August 13th, 2011 at 08:00am
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