The Human Climax - Comments

oh man that really is a terrible place! She does need to get out of there! I hope she takes Dylan and Christian with her :)

Heh, I'll comment too then. :D
This is amazing! It's a really great concept. :D
And, I just start reading and it ends on a cliff hanger. -.- That has happened with almost every story I have ever read on here. I'm not complaining but... XD
Your writing is amazing. O_O

aww only since there was sugar on top! :p haha jk jk i wouldve commented anyway lol So i wonder if shes gonna go with them, or if she'll bring along Dylan and Christian or even Scarlet or other people in the crew. cant wait for more! and awesome as always! :D i feel bad that no one else has commented yet! its too good of a story not to comment on! :)

i really love how vivid your writing is! i really got in to it! haha and i really like the way the storyline is going its really cool :) Also i want to know who this Merlin guy is... he doesnt sound very good to me... anyway fabulous job! cant wait for more! :D

awesome! i cant wait to hear more! its a really cool concept! and i do that all the time, base stories off of my dreams that is haha