Oceano - Comments

Ohh I love this layout too much. It is so pretty with the blues and the anchor and the different font, just wonderful. Oh my gosh and then you click on the chapter and it gets better and there's MORE ocean for the subtitle background. I really like it.

This is beautifully written, honestly. The descriptions you used in this are so well worked into the story it's hard for me to try and find something to critique, I feel I can't because you have done such a great job at writing this. Your metaphors within the last large paragraph were stunning, I loved how you continuously wrote, she is and came up with new things to say. Beautiful.

Wow Is all I can say of this story.

First of all, I really adore the simple background. I think it ties into the title perfectly. I think this drabble was wonderful. The mystery girl that was described in so many ways really intrigued me because she is a mystery. Even though I would like to know more about the girl, I think this drabble was perfect since it made me wanting to know more. Anyway, this was amazing.

This is really interesting. I'd love to know more about what you were writing about, because I think you could really expand on this, and go more in-depth with what you've written, other than that this is really very good.