The Only Thing That Matters Is the Ending - Comments

Zomg, I subscribed. :O

i loved all of them :]
they were really good.

I'm the contest starter, and, I would just like to say that I am very impressed with your work. I had high expectations and you met most of them within the first couple of paragraphs.

You had the requirements down.
Checklist:

Theme: yes
GPS: yes (proofreading is very evident, very impressive)
Charlie: yes (interesting take)
Political View: I felt as though you had a different approach than one would have taken, but I suppose I will count it. yes.
Applesauce: yes
Inspirational quote: There were a few in here that I could count, but I loved the use of "Never forgive, never forget". yes

Wonderful job!