hey just read your entire story... ok so "and get into my car - it's an old car" So he has a car in the first chapter but later in the story he talks about wishing he had enough money for a car :? Maybe it's late and im delusional..
For the record, I choked on my milk and cookies (yes, I know it's not Chirstmas yet) when I was reading this. It was SO effing funny! xDDDD Keep of the good work! ^_~ *gives thumbs up*
I know I should vote on the thing, and I did, but I think it should be the drummer! Most stories, it is ALWAYS the singer or guitarist or whatever... hardly ever the sexy drummer!!! <3 I say Drummer!!!! <3 xD