I could slap John in the face right now, just urgh, what a shit. Poor wee Haven )': I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to read more and see what happens.
I really like this so far, I can't wait to see what happens and I hope John snaps out of his douchbagery or whatever the hell is going on and remembers Haven and be the good wee boy we know he is and save him, hehe.
Started reading this story of yours too. And you gotta be kiddin me? How can u write like that?! I'm in love with this story only after two chapters. Keep goin!
but i like it.