I honestly didn't think I would like this story so much, but about halfway through I realized I loved it so much. Probably what I like about it so much is that it really reflects VC Andrews's stories. The only thing that bothered me was that psychiatrist was spelled incorrectly.
Wow. Thank you for writing this. I really love it! I definitely didn't expect this ending, but it's still good. :D It'd be really nice if you could write maybe a 2 chapter story in Wilbur's point of view? Kind of like a spin-off, like his point of view in his relationship with gabriel, the suicide, or maybe like the story in a nutshell.
i loved this story more than i thought i would! It made me so happy every time you updated, but so sad by the time i finished every chapter, and now that it's done, i am just going to read it over and over! This story really opened my eyes to hardships of life for some people. For forbidden lovers, and depression that seems to run in the family. You did a WONDERFUL job!
I actually enjoyed it a lot more then I thought I would when I started reading it. I'm not really into incest or slash and yet I somehow still enjoyed it. Partly, I believe, because you didn't focus on the sexual parts as much as most of those stories do. You got down to the real relationships. I think the most enjoyable part was the fact that so much of it was unexpected. I hadn't expected it to be Wilbur and Gabriel in a relationship. I hadn't expected Cherry to take such a turn and I had definitely not seen that ending coming. The whole story itself was a very unexpected treat for me. Thank you for that!
Sending so much love back. I really like this story because of that reason. I've always wanted to write a story from the point of view of an outsider, but I was always too afraid to do it because I thought I would never be able to pull it off. I'm sure this story will go down in my list of favorites for sure. I already recommended it last chapter. :)
Thts the end of the story, u said three more chapters tht was two, what about the last chapter it can't end tht quickly, umm who is Cherry's baby daddy and when was she pregnant? please don't end it now can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)