I subscribed to this the other day but didn't have a chance to read it. Finally did and I love it! I love seeing Sidney's feelings for her. Keep it up, I can't wait for more.
I agree about the name consistency Kermit mentioned. But the plot and dialogue other than that are good! I'm intrigued! Looking forward to more! Subscribed!
You've got a good start! I'm looking forward to reading more. Just one comment re: name consistency - you seem to switch back and forth between Vanessa and Victoria for the friend's name. In chapter 1 she's Vanessa, except for in this line: "Victoria followed her gaze from the interrupted Max to the remaining guys at the table." In chapter 2 she's Victoria. Other than that, looks good!