Poor Donna </3 I feel so bad and maybe relate way to much with her. I just hope one day he does that one thing that makes it all never seem worth it and it gives her the courage to walk away.
I'm so glad you're writing a Soupy story, he's amazing lol. Also i really really like this. I like how you bring in a serious subject and try to get Donna help. I also like Soupy playing superman and figuring it all out :) Can't wait for the next update :)
I'm glad that you are going to continue writting this story. It's my favorite one that you have written so far, especially in your Bruins series. [And I'm not even a Bruins fan, at all.]
I think that you should just go with the flow and see what comes out of your writers' block (that's what I always do). You can make something completely outrageous happen that would change the whole plot to make you more interested--just remember that the choices that you make with the story are completely up to you and that you don't always need an opinion to keep going. I think that this story is going smoothly and that you should see where it goes. But if you are sure that you don't want to keep working on this, I would be more than happy give you ideas, or to "rent" the story from you--if you'd want that. ~Anya <3
yaaay!!!! u updated!!!!! this was amazing!!!! loved reading about Looch, Raina, and Jasmiins again... UPDATE SOON!!!! and thanks for the comments on my story!!!! :)