First off, i'm so glad you posted something on here again, your writing always amazes me! That being said, i think this is a great one shot, and i love that you didn't make Danny out to be more than he is - which, let's face it, is a sex-obsessed arsehole. But i think that's what makes him so endearing, and you captured it brilliantly. Also, on behalf of all the british people who suffer through cliched colloquialisms and flat-out errors in writing, thank you for making Danny and Cameron's accents believable. Overall, this makes for an entertaining read, and your writing style is as enviably fluid as always :)
August 20th, 2011 at 09:47pm