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  • Sienna-Rose-1

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    Helloooo, i have stumbled across this story through comment swap and so glad I did! Huge Harry Potter fan and loving this spin off. Layout it to die for and I love the darkness of the relationship between Sirius and Gabe contrasting against the sweet genuine friendship between her and Rumus. Excellent!
    August 24th, 2014 at 01:27pm
  • Shani__xX

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    Such an original story idea! Really really in love with the premise. I just started reading (came across your story on Comment Swap) and I'm such a fan so far :D

    I haven't reached the end just yet (such a slow reader) and I knooow Gabe and Remus are just best friends but...idk, maybe it's the way he always calls her 'sweetheart', or how easily they seem to touch and hug each other...I'm shipping them right now :p haha. Looking forward to reading more!
    August 21st, 2014 at 03:33pm
  • arielahh

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    Yay thanks for updating! :) I'm glad she's starting to believe him.
    May 11th, 2014 at 09:08pm
  • Vesper Lestrange

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    @fallen_angel94 Hopefully soon. Between work and school I haven't felt very inspired and it seemed as if not many people were interested in it.
    March 31st, 2014 at 08:28am
  • fallen_angel94

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    Love this when are you going to update again?
    March 31st, 2014 at 06:19am
  • Vesper Lestrange

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    Arielahh what did you think? :)
    December 23rd, 2013 at 07:36am
  • arielahh

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    I'm still here :)
    December 21st, 2013 at 04:48pm
  • ashleygreenethebest

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    I love this story, it's amazing! I can't believe he turned up though. Please update soon!
    July 16th, 2012 at 09:04pm
  • katie13

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    Hey, I'm from comment swap. I must say, I loved the idea of this story! I've never read a story like this before and I really like the way the plot is flowing so smoothly already. Most Harry Potter fanfics focus on Harry, Hermione and the Weasleys so it's nice to see a Sirius one. I like it so far, keep up the good work!
    July 8th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • xxStrangerInMoscowxx

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    This comment is based on the first few chapters. I've never read story like this before, nor have I ever looked, but it's really good. The characters are likeable enough. The transtions were kinda awkward starting off, but I hope you continue to improve the flow of the story :D xo.
    July 6th, 2012 at 09:30am
  • TheWh0rr0r

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    I only read the first chapter and I'll tell you why. I'm probably gonna get a lot of shit for this too. I've never read or seen the Harry Potter books/movies. I mean I do have appreciation for people who can actually write (such as you) instead of putting out complete shit that doesn't make sense and I know you can't get as much information in the first chapter, I do that too (put information throughout the story). You're a good writer.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 04:35am
  • JustThinking

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    Well I'll be damned... That was quick.. I wonder just what Sirius' plan for this is. But since he is him, he's probably winging it, even if he did have like 12 or 13 years to think about what to do about it. Good to know this is alive btw, had t read it again so I could follow the new chapter in he story. A good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:10pm
  • Charisse-Eliza!

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    Just one thing before I get to singing your praises, you wrote galleons as gallons. But im figuring that that may be word being a pain in the ass.
    ANYWAY. I love that this is a different HP fanfic. This is a fantastic idea. I love it! The relationship that Gabrielle and Remus have is amazing, I wish that I had that sort of relationship with any body. I just hope that what she has planned doesnt ruin her friendship with him. Im really interested in where this goes. Please, write some more. :D
    July 1st, 2012 at 02:20pm
  • clockwork wand

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    The story sounds good =) can't wait till the next update <3
    February 21st, 2012 at 06:09pm
  • JustThinking

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    this sounds like it could turn out to be an awesome story. so far it's really good. I'm liking the plot, the characters and so on.. I'm thinking that I'm going to subscribe and when you update again, I'll try and give you a better comment than this one ^.^ so more soon please.
    February 16th, 2012 at 10:21pm
  • Vesper Lestrange

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    I'm glad you all are enjoying it! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
    January 11th, 2012 at 07:44am
  • thefartingsheep

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    Ooooo this is epic, can't wait for next chappy XD x
    January 10th, 2012 at 07:43pm
  • Brunette Vengeance

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    This seems really interesting.
    I can't wait for more!
    *Subscribes
    November 18th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • Bamboo33010

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    This is awesome so far! I cant wait for you to update!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 11:13pm