@ Rianbow Dash- OMG I thought cause the comments were from over a year ago I thought that you probably just forgot about this and it was just a long lost story
So the idea for this is good, but you really need to do more research before you start. A doctor wouldn't have their patient take an at-home pregnancy test, because those aren't guaranteed to be 100% accurate. Like I said, the idea's definitely a good one, you just need to research before writing a fic that involves pregnancy.