I was talking with Dr Sirius Amory [literally, sirius amory.] the other day and decided that this is a band I should really listen to more, so just pure dumb luck that I came across this! I for one am a big fan of neodystopian settings and believable science fiction characters, so I really liked this, despite its short length. I hope you end up writing more on it. Rec and sub.
Cheers,
-James