Hello thanks for the entry :) It was very good and when the band went on tour I really suspected that something was going to wrong. Which it did obviously with the fire.
I'm just glad Izzy and Ian were alright in the end and you made it into a happy ending. It was really romantic to and how Brian told Izzy he'd protect her. I was constantly going 'awwww' throughout most of it. I noticed some grammar mistakes but not that many. Overall, it was a great story.
I'm just glad Izzy and Ian were alright in the end and you made it into a happy ending. It was really romantic to and how Brian told Izzy he'd protect her. I was constantly going 'awwww' throughout most of it. I noticed some grammar mistakes but not that many. Overall, it was a great story.
Good luck for the contest!