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  • hangsang.

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    Perfection. That's all that needs to be said! :)
    January 20th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • rockinout4thedead

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    Damm its all implied but sexy and you can tell frank wants to be a part of that
    October 12th, 2011 at 05:04am
  • shirtless

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    Well this was amazing. I stumbled onto this story from a reccing thread and oh my god I can't get over how well it was written. You portrayed both of their personalities so well in such a short chapter. I love the use of run on sentences too; it all flows together perfectly. And the last line was just... I can't even form the words. I'm speechless. This was phenonmenal.
    September 6th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • fun ghoul fez.

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    You picked the absolute most perfect picture for this, considering it is set in high school; I love how awkward Mikey is, with his touseled hair and his glasses. Sheer love. And that beginning; all of your stories have such strong beginnings; I'm envious. And that paragraph afterwards was simply amazing. Without even showing things from the brother's perspective, you completely illustrated the dynamic between them. I especially loved how you mentioned Frank not liking them; that was a neat touch! That last paragraph... words can honestly not describe how much I adored that paragraph. I loved how the sentences seemed a little too long but it just seemed to work. I'm honestly going to go rec this on the Reccing thread because it was absolutely wonderful.
    September 6th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Flying Flawed

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    You should totally make something out of this. It would be great. I could totally see a vampire Waycest coming out of this! Hehe! :)
    September 2nd, 2011 at 04:41am
  • death-before-disco

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    I just want to say that I adore all your waycests. This is amazing.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 02:56am
  • bolly

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    This was also bloody brilliant. The dynamic you have between the Ways never fails to be my favourite.
    September 1st, 2011 at 04:27pm
  • murderdolls_queen

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    Christ I wanted more. I wanted so. Much. More. -flails- You always do that to me! Leaving me wanting more D: but I know there isnt gunna be more! -flails-

    <3
    September 1st, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • murderdolls_queen

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    Christ I wanted more. I wanted so. Much. More. -flails- You always do that to me! Leaving me wanting more D: but I know there isnt gunna be more! -flails-

    <3
    September 1st, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • Michael James Way.

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    Baby. BABY. Jesus shit. That last line. I can't even.
    YOU AND YOUR FUCKING DYNAMIC BETWEEN THE WAY'S AND THEIR DESCRIPTION AND THE REPETITION AT THE EXACT RIGHT TIME.
    When you comment on my writing, I'm always grateful, but confused because you do shit like this that is so good and far beyond my stuff and. Just. BABY. I'm gonna miss you so bad.
    August 16th, 2011 at 10:47pm
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