This Distance Can't Haunt Us - Comments

this was nothing as i was expecting and its great!

This was really cute :D

alright, i honestly never read stories that aren't like a gazillion chapters long. but, this was about James and i just had to. so this was absolutely amazing. no, i'm not just saying that, it was written extremely well. you portrayed Morgan being blind so well, it's shocking. i was constantly smiling when they met up and even teared up a little. i honestly think you should turn this into a story, it'd be super amazing. besides, there are like no James stories. i loved Danny's line, 'Hey there sweet thang.' I literally smiled from ear to ear. xD i'm super glad he didn't ask her to go on tour, he told her she was going. and i was also super glad that she said yes. anyway, excellent job. (:

I really liked this, though I admit that I don't really know anything about the characters. :) I don't usually read fanfiction, but I could understand what was going on despite not knowing a lot about the band. It was pretty sad, the way she spoke about being blind, but I'm really glad it had a happy ending and that he asked her to go with him. It was well-written; you could really imagine what the main character was going through with her blindness, which I'm sure would be something that's incredibly difficult to overcome. The language you used was good, and I didn't notice any spelling or grammar errors, which is pretty unusual. :)