Walking Contradictions - Comments

AD-DA-DAH! IT'S OVER! NOOOO!

Oh. Oh, wait. Wait, what-what is this? A return? Oh, hell yes!

I was about to cry because it was over and then I thought you were going to leave me on this last chapter without knowing who the hell Cindy really is and why the kids are so very suspicious-and probably right. But sure enough, there shall be more. It is merely a part 1! Oh, hah-hah, happy day. :3

This was a fun ride, and I can't wait for it to pick back up. I wuv you! :3

OH FUCK IT'S RETURNED.

"We can beat the shit out of each other in hell." Thank you. Thank you for existing. God, I love you.

I'm braindead right now, and I can't say much more...I know you be disappointed, I sorry! D: But I love this story and I'm SO happy to see it's up and running once more! Take THAT, Writer's Block!

Okay...Now I love Izzy. Yes. Oh, and one of my favorite lines of all time:

"Now both of you shut the fuck up and act like you fucking love each other before I kill you both!"

If only Thomas knew how much I could fricking sympathize. That was....just....YES. I was in love. XD And now a troop mother is home and it's snowing and there's just happiness all around...On that side of Earth. Then Mike's getting attacked and Thomas is ready to kick some ass and all of this just makes me want to squeal in happiness and glee because I'm waiting for more.

I apologize for not commenting sooner, because I meant to, and I'd read it all, but I could never comment and now I can and it just feels natural and right. :D And Thomas, I swear, if you do not come back like I want you to come back, someone's getting smacked on the back of the hand with a spatula. (See how I remember these things? ;D)

Okay. I have to get two chapters in a review. TWO. Oh, lawd.

First: Chapter 11: "Anna baby, please, shut the fuck up."-Oh. My. God. I love Thomas. I love this whole fricking family. And I want to cuddle Tre. Just so you know, if you wondering why Anna may wake up without a dog the next morning. How awesome would a haunted house be?! Well, not awesome for Anna, obviously, but still. Awesome in some sense. I find it cute how even though it seems like Thomas is a bit annoyed with his daughter crying, "Ghost!" all over the place, he still comforts her. Aww.

Chapter 12: Izzy, you little bi...Let me stop myself. That's at the end of the chapter.
"What are you guys doing?"
"Busting our asses!"-I can't wait until my mom calls me and I'm working in the cold like that one day. That will be the ultimate response. Thomas is good at art, too? Oh, hell yeah. And now here come Australian friendlies!...Well, some friendlies. Izzy is instantly a brat. I don't like her much at all. I checked out the character page and I'm sure I'll love her soon. It just ain't now.

Oh. WOW. I LOVE ANNA. She would be the PERFECT best friend, and all that Boondocks quoting had me rolling on the floor. I was in love. This chapter is awesome, and my cousin was reading over my shoulder again. He loved the use of profanity. What will I do with him? *shakes head*

Anywho, Alex needs to back it on up. Like, back it on up far.

"Something something something something a mother cries in the ghetto!"-I'm telling you. In. Love.

Great story and I know how you feel. I'm writing a non Green Day story....Yeah, well, I still incorporated their music lol. Check out my stories?

"Hey kids, wanna join the church of Satan?" And there's the quote of the chapter. That quote was awesome. I wonder if someone would have said yes? XD Lacey needs to stop being a bitch. Oh, wait, she did momentarily! YAY! And what's this with the threatning of the spoon?

YAY TWICE! Sam and Sarah are back! I officially love this chapter, I really like when people bring back characters, especially if they're characters I love.

I love Thomas' mom. Smacking the back of your hand with a spatula is fricking EFFECTIVE. Brad, stop being pissed and admit your love for Green Day! XD Anna's dog=Win.

Anyway, this chapter was, I want to say, family-oriented, as it only dealt with Thomas, Anna, and Brad-and Thomas's mom, I suppose, and the little dog, but they didn't come in until later. I like family-orineted chapters, as it allows you to get a feel of their connection, how they act towads one another, and while that has been sprinkled around in the other chapters, I just really like this one.

Oh, and I love how you put: "...put the fat ass dog in the car." Hahahaha!

Dang. And everything was going so good, too! Noooo! Well, at least it keeps the suspense going, eh?

Sally Hansen didn't fuck around with her colors. That is so true in so many, many ways.

"Just shut up and go to work so I can walk around naked." I'm saying that to my cousin next time...Whenever he gets a job, that is. That is a wonderful line! XD I love one-liners, and this chapter definetly had them. So, the money was fake? Crap. Tony's scary, and all I have to say to the Andersons is GTFO. FAST. Before TOny comes and murders ya in ya sleep. X__X

Go, story! Go, story! Go, story! Go!

Kendra's dead. Aw. Well, sure she was...EH...but, aw. Aw for Brad and Anna (if she cares) and Thomas.

Oz-He'll rob you blind with a smile! :D That sounds like some psychotic product catchphrase or something. Very nice, though. I like this chapter, what an interesting birthday Ms. Anna had! Thievery and luggage and a very sketchy Oz. What fun, what fun! Congrats on another pleasing chapter!

"Anderson, party of three." And Kendra is officially OUT OF THERE. You know, I would call her Kenny just to piss her off. Oh, well, cry me a river, Kenny. Stuff it. Aw, Brad is so cute! I love little kids sleeping. I don't know why, it's just cute, and pair it up with a cute kid to boot. So, now they're a trio, and this should lead to where? Hell if I know. That's why I must read!

Oh, in chapter four, I forgot to mention this-Thomas is watching a video full of WIN. :D

Bumps in the relationship, I see. BIG bumps. And drugs and screaming and anger and a cute little two-year-old in the mix. I know I was warned...But I still really liked it. I think one of my favorite lines was, "I'm never doing drugs again." My cousin-he's about 16- was standing beside me reading this, and he suddenly started saying that line over and over, for some unknown reason-He's a pretty good actor, though. XD He's never taken drugs though. He's so damn silly.

I understand how some people may not like (ahem-APPRECIATE) the darkness of this chapter, but I am not one of those people. I really, really liked it. It's serious, and you can pull serious off quite well, as I've seen before.

Hah-hah, the last half of the third chapter made me laugh. Sarah and Sam rock, they're so silly and arguementative. I have to congradulate Kenny for getting out of there-Daddy's scary. And hey, more characters! Yay! But I must say, I think Chap. 3 is my favorite. The last half is just so friendly and the first half is in your face!

I enjoy this. Very much so, yes I do! There was a line in both chapters that had me rolling, but I can't remember them! Poo.

Oh, well. I still love this, and hee-hee, I saw the character page. :D Can't wait for more~

I like it! Write More. :D