Something Else - Comments

I’ve never listened to The Maine before, or read any fanfic about them for that matter, but I’m actually really into this story! One thing I might suggest, is that when your main character is meeting the other members of the band, she might give a short description of their appearance or something. As an outsider who has never seen any of them, I kind-of missed out there while reading because I couldn’t really visualize any of the characters in the story—during the second or third chapter I had to open Google and look them up XD But I really love how slowly you progressed their relationship; it’s so much more real than when an author rushes things. I like that you took your time and gave us several chapters to really understand their relationship better before we get pulled into an emotional rollercoaster. Lol

I enjoy your writing a lot. It seems like you have a clear idea of what you want to do with this story, and you do a wonderful job of getting your points across. And although I’ve never heard their music, I would totally continue to read this story! I give it a two-thumbs-up and a huge recommendation!

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First thing I noticed was the layout. Normally I'm not one to comment on it, but I really liked yours. Simple, yet elegant. You're a very fluent writer and I found myself really getting in the story. I also am a huge fan of the name Keagan (: Keep doing what you do, there's really nothing I have to correct you on. Although, some places could be a bit more detailed.

The first thing that stuck out to me was the layout. I just love it a lot. ALSO what made me go 'askljdglkjsdga' was the fact that this was about The Maine. I absolutely adore this story and I had no choice but to subscribe and recommend because I love it that much. Please update soon before I go crazy. Hahah.

You developed a really strong relationship between K and Kennedy, it's so sweet! I really like this story, but I do think there were some missing details. You could have added some more tour moments, and you could describe John's drinking in a little more depth, but this is still really good. I can't wait to read more!(:

This is really good. I love the friendship Keagan has with Kennedy, especially, and I can't wait for her and John to fall in loooove. Update soon :)

aww
im happy that its all good between them :D
cant wait for more <3

John's being stupid...what a surprise. And it sounds as if Keegan might be realizing that she likes John. He better not mess if up!

arhhhh!!!
that boy has to stop drinking before i slap him across the face!
my god!!
cant wait for more <3

No problem!
I'm loving where this is headed, I hope they end up together!

please don't trash it!!!!
i love where this is headed!

Keagan and John's relationship seems to be progressing nicely, if ya know what I mean ;) can't wait for more!

hi, so, I love this story. (:

You've got in suspense for what's going to happen at the party.

Thank you for the update! I'm so psyched for this to pick up!!

Drunk John confessing his high school feelings for Keagan is adorable.

p.s
PLEASE DONT TRASH IT!

i really like this story meanwhile
im still kind of confused to where its going but im still gonna continue reading because i really wanna know what happens next :
cant wait for more <3

Cliff hanger!):

I can't wait to find out wha the "demons lurking inside him" are. I honestly love this story.

I get excited everytime the emailfor an update for this shows up in my inbox. Thanks you!