Redemption in the Verse. - Comments

  • littleedeath

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    awwwh no! Oliver is such UGH! And Amanda can't fucking die for all I care why would she want her boyf doing something like that to another girl.. Issues much? You should just make Josh come back from the dead :(
    August 10th, 2012 at 07:05am
  • matildazander

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    No aw poor Tom! I can't oh I'm crying so much. It's just so sad oh update soon
    August 6th, 2012 at 02:21pm
  • liv-wat-up

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    this i s so heart breakingly beautiful i just cannot deal with these emotions, its so well written! i literally cried reading this omg its perfect
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:50am
  • Scarlet Fields

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    I'll be honest, I first started reading this a couple months ago, but couldn't get into it. I'm reading one of your other stories, and I really enjoy your style of writing, so I wanted to read another by you. So I gave this another chance. OH MY LORD THIS IS SO AMAZING!!!!!! You write it SO WELL!!!! On the last chapter, how it ended with her asking Tom if he loved her, I was like "Oh my god what's he gonna say?" Then it's a chapter from the past. ajsklfhdj;ladhf I WAS CRYING FOR 10 MINUTES. Not really, but I did let out a slight wail of emotion. Please update soon! c: <3
    July 29th, 2012 at 03:10am
  • LiveFast.DieYoung

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    I really can't get over how well you've constructed this story! Keep up the good work! Please update ASAP :)
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:11pm
  • littleedeath

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    such a good chapter(: but yeaah not really like the whole Paxton and Tom thing :/ it just doesn't seem right like i figured she'd see Oli every time she see Tom?
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:13am
  • NervousHolyGhost

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    Haha, oh my god, why did Amanda & Jules tell Paxton these things? Didn't they see the discomfort?!?
    Oh, and she found her bra and now she basically knows! This is probably when Oli kills Josh, huh? Or something terrible.
    I can't wait until the next update though :D Update soon!
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • dean ambrose.

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    Oh snaaap, she found her bra. This story always has me jumping with joy every time you update, it's that good! I actually like these chapters that are set in the past better because it's like being in an episode of Criminal Minds or something c:
    Great update and update soon!
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • nativelungs

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    Gotta say, not really loving the whole Tom&Paxton idea..it's weird to me. I figured the ymas boys would be taking care of her more
    July 11th, 2012 at 04:06pm
  • PadawanPhoebe

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    Oh sweet fucking lord. I am in a glass case of emotion.
    I cannot properly word my feelings right now.
    Your writing is godly. You are a god.
    I'm speaking in Tumblr because I honestly cannot.
    It's so creative and not like anything I've read and dude I cry for Josh and Oliver makes me punch walls.
    I aspire to write with such brilliance as you.
    July 11th, 2012 at 06:35am
  • daydreamz

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    Love this
    July 10th, 2012 at 08:01am
  • unlost1996

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    Oh Matt...
    I really love this story, update soon!
    July 9th, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • ReadyToFall22

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    oh my lord. I love this story so much. I'm amazed sometimes by the writers on here because their so amazing! You're one of those writers :)
    July 9th, 2012 at 05:52pm
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    I cannot believe Matt made that comment. Oh man...Anyway...this is great, AS USUAL!
    July 9th, 2012 at 04:38pm
  • youmeat69

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    i love this so much i just okAY i don't think i've commented on this before im so sorry im so bad at leaving comments but i've been reading and waiting for new chapters for a while now and i was really stoked when i saw that you didn't leave this story because i honestly think this is one of the best i've read so far ok okok ok
    July 9th, 2012 at 04:19pm
  • NervousHolyGhost

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    Well, isn't this cute? Matt's a dick >:| Buuuuuuut, still I love this story and how Tom and Paxton are becoming a thing, though it's kind of sad because I was all for her and Josh, but of course he's dead so Tom is definitely the next best thing.
    I can't wait until the next chapter :D
    July 9th, 2012 at 12:11pm
  • Snapback-Princess

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    Oh no, Paxton! Eager to know what will happen! Xx
    July 9th, 2012 at 09:37am
  • unlost1996

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    Holy shit. This was soooo good. Please update soon :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:11pm
  • emilynsnatl

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    Ohmygod ! I'm freaking out, update sooon ! xx
    June 26th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • LiveFast.DieYoung

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    Ifucking love you and this story its just so..agghh just update again soon please :)
    June 26th, 2012 at 12:04am