Oli is a fucking creep!!!! I honestly think it was him in the bathroom when she thought it was Josh. I think he has this weird obsession with the girl as well as Amanda. I don't know. I get this weird vibe from the two. I still think it's Amanda that kills Josh but after this chapter I'm thinking the two are neck in neck with the weirdness hahaha.
So stoked that you finally updated girl. I love this story. Like I said before, it's unique as fuck hahaha. I really hope to get an update soon! I was worried that you were going to delete the story ):
i love the new chapter omg i'm always excited for this story. and for ur next story maybe matt nicholls could be the lead? lol idk but i love this story!
So I have to say that this is fucking amazing. Totally different from the usual shit on here, I'm quite jealous of your ideas girl!
And as a hint, i think Amanda's the one that kills Josh hahaha. There's just something off about that girl. Totally out of left field but that's my own opinion.
Love this! Amanda is a little annoying but I like her :L It's upsetting how we know that Josh dies but I think that it's good because it's got a bit of a twist to it, if that makes sense :S Anyway update soon! :D xx
Aww, Josh and Paxton are just perfect together. Their relationship is so romantic and sweet. I still feel horrible knowing what's going to happen to Josh, though. But the newest chapter was wonderful. I enjoyed reading it, and the part where Amanda tried to snuggle with them made me smile even if she is a bit annoying. I liked that bit of foreshadowing that you put in there. Like, the part where Pax asked where her bra was. I feel like Oli might've taken it or something, but maybe I'm just thinking too much into this. Anyway, I'm getting overly excited for this story to continue. I hope you'll update again soon. :)
Okay, this looks amazing. The summary pulled me in immediately (that, and because I love Josh Franceschi to pieces), and the prologue was just suspenseful and wonderful. I'm really looking forward to this. :)