Love this chapter! I can just imagine how mums at a preschool would look at jake and the paedo comment is hilarious! Also I am an English person so if you need someone to help you out with English person research I would be more than happy to help :) Yay keep writing! Love itttt! :D
They are so adorable together. Oh, and I cracked up at them dropping her off at preschool. I can only imagine how much attention they could draw up. Haha.
I loved this chapter because carnivals are amazing but they never come to town near where I live. But I do have a question is it actual funnel cake or funnel cake like you get at the O.C. Maryland boardwalk because that s**t is not funnel cake, they put toppings on it! Sorry I'm really picky about what's funnel cake and what's not, I wan't even think about eating the stuff that isn't made right.
Ok I just want to say thank you soooo much for this story, it makes up for having a crappy day at work when I get to come home and read this! My firm favourite! Jake is amazing!! Yay! Please update again soon! :D
I have to say, coming home from the first day of hell/school to this update made my day MUCH better. <3
I like Jake's little cockblocking maneuver there. Sneaky sneaky. I'm also amused by how they all interact with each other. It's really funny and cute at the same time, like they're a little family.
I look forward to the updates everyday... I was sad when I didn't see one when I got home today, but I checked again, and I got so excited to see a new chapter, that it was pathetic. Very pathetic. I think I already said something like this, but I'm obsessed with this story.