Behind the Mask - Comments

This looks delightful.
I'm subscribing. (:
Update soon!

I like the layout, but I feel there is too much blue on it. The banner, the background, the strip next to where the text is, and even the links for clicking the different chapters. I'm not saying it's bad, but I feel there could be too much blue there, ya know? Maybe try some lighter color blue for a part of it, just so it's not overly done?

I like the summary. Along with the banner, I have a feeling the story is about romance with a bit of suspense in it.

In the first paragraph you said: I could only just image the fingers of Father gliding across the smooth ivory and ebony keys, recreating the classical works of every and all musician in history.
I feel musicians should be plural in this sentence.

In the third paragraph you said: Sure, I wasn’t enjoying the party as a whole, but hearing the gracefully waltz put a smile on my lips and cast the illusion that where I was, I was not.
I could be wrong, so please ignore me if I am, but I feel that should say "graceful waltz" instead of "gracefully waltz". Like I said, I could be wrong.

MMMM he sounds sexy :D I really like where this is going so far. Please continue!

Layout is really...blue. Haha. I love the banner. It used to be my iPod screen thing.

I love love love LOVE masquerades. I collect masquerade masks! I love them so much!
There was at some point where you wrote 'imag' and I think you might have meant to type 'imagine'.

So this guys seems so intriguing. I want to know who he is.
I wish you would have added a bit more emotion though. You had a lot to work with and although you didn't let down, I do feel as if you had more to give.

Loved it, thus far.

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hmmm this looks intresting! I Love the layout btw! Please continue(:

LOVE LOVE LOVE.
I love the picture. I mean. It's so beautiful and sweet and cute and. <3333

There was one spot, you said 'actually' I think, when I'm positive you meant 'actual'. *shrugs* I'm pretty sure it was that word. I could be extremely blonde though.

I NEED TO KNOW THIS MAN. THE EYES. OMG THE EYES. *dies*

Please continue *puppydog eyes*

Pretty summary :)

The color scheme and the layout are just amazing I adore it. The summary says so much without saying anything at all. The idea of having that sort of leverage over someone has always intruiged me, I can't wait until this starts. Definitely subscribing.

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This looks very interesting. I really adore the layout. The blue color scheme is amazing. And from the little bit of summary there is, the picture goes very well.
I'm subbing, because this has perked my curiosity, and I want to know what is going on.

Good work so far! <3

Oh my goodness gracious. I absolutely adore that little snippet of a summary you've given us there. It's sneaky and mysterious and fun and cheeky all wrapped up in one. And it only takes you three lines to accomplish all that! Got talent, you. I like the idea of someone playing games with another person. I dunno if it's just me, but that kind of manipulation and toying with another person has always amused me, so you've already got me super hooked.

The banner is perfection as well. You've touched another interest of mine - masks and masquerades and people in costumes. Guhh. I love it.

Another small thing I really liked was how well you kept to the blue color scheme. It's simple and doesn't distract from the summary, or even the banner, because the banner is lovely enough on its own without needing a crazy background or something.

I am so subscribed :D This looks like it's gonna be such an awesome story!

from what i can tell so far, the story looks interesting. i don't like making judgements simply on the summary page though. i do like the banner, and the layout in general for certain. the summary is brief... and almost sounds as if someone is playing a game with the girl.

so please, do continue this story. as you said, it may be a bit out of your comfort zone, but who ever said that writing wasn't supposed to be one gigantic experiment? reaching outside of the box will only help you improve. so definately, do try writing the story. i hope to see how it progresses from the summary. when there is a chapter put out, i will comment again to give an in depth opinion. i would love to see where it continues.

for now, i believe i shall subscribe so i am informed when it all begins~

I love the layout, it's elegant and outthere. It really matches the title. I love the little summary, very intresting and mysterious.

First thought when I read the summary, "This is a stalker fic. I am so betting it's a stalker fic!" Now I really can't wait for an update because I wanna see if I'm right xD I also can't wait for a chapter because it has grabbed me by my curiousity and once you grab that, you can never lose it :3 The layout gives me the idea of silence, like a secret and you have to read on to find out what it is. You tease you! -subscribe-

~Till next time, A. Squirrel

This looks very good. The colors on the layout are a bit dark and they are high on contrast, but other than that I like the look. I don't think the layout entirely brings me in, but the summary definitely is. I like that it's short and it's taunting the reader. I already like the guy character just by reading that because I can tell he'll be very mysterious but playful. The divider is beautiful also!
I think this will be a great story and I am going to subscribe to it! Good luck <3

This looks really good, actually. And, I'm guessing it's a romance, which I'm not usually too excited about, but the layout really pulled me in. And then the summary went so perfectly with the image, that I just have to subscribe and see what you're doing here!

I actually really like the layout. It seemed a bit odd with the dark colors at first but it's nice. (:
The banner is cool and I think it goes well with the story.

The summary is interesting although it's really short, it makes me want to read more.

Oh, the divider is really cool too, aha.

I'm subbing. (:

This does sound interesting.

:D

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This story, as I might have already told you, looks so amazing. I am subscribing and I cannot wait for this story to begin!

This sounds interesting :) I think the summary would've been more interesting if it was just those two lines at the very top. But that's only my opinion.

I subscribed :) I can't wait till this begins!