Power Outage - Comments

I have no idea what Torchwood is but Ireally liked this. After reading 'locked in a room', I was like SEX SCEEEEENE. I love how Jack carries lube in his coat pocket. I loved how the girl was just like, "Okay." without a second thought. This was a nice read (:

Torchwood fanfic FTW! I love that show (: Although it's kind of confusing, it gets me my fill of drama and science fiction (: anyway, I liked this.

First off, the layout was lovely. I wasn’t very fond of the banner because of the text (it was placed oddly) but the layout itself worked very well with the colors and the background. ;) Now, you know that I know little to nothing about this fandom. xD I can’t figure out how pronounce that guy’s name, no matter how hard I may try. *is pathetic* BUT. I adore the relationship between these two. I love how they’re like hm…stuck in a room together…SEX. AND THEN JACK HAS LUBE LIKE MAGIC MAN. Anyway! For concrit I would say to watch your pauses – in some places, you over-use commas. ;) Other than that, there’s nothing much more to mention! :) The sex scene was positively delicious, and I adored how you had it so it was all a set up the entire time. Very nice job love!

<3 Haven